HOME SWEET HOME
I grew up in the modest
home. For me, home is a place to grow and learn about life. Home is a place
where I can be 100 percent me and it’s where I don’t have to be perfect. I can
study quietly but when my mom scold me I want runaway from home to Neverland. In my home everyone
loves each other and my home is filled with love and joy and it spreads
throughout my home.
When I go to another town,
I really miss my lovely bed —the place where I can’t get of in the morning— and
my mom’s dish. The atmosphere in my house is very joyful but sometimes it’s
very noisy when my little sister cry loudly. Actually, there are some rules
that should I obey like sweeping my own room, eat on time, etc.
Anyway, my dream house
look like is would be lots of grass, a gorgeous garden and full of tropical
flower. I wanna have a huge bedroom with a lot of pillows on my bed and there
should be a beautiful and large pool. It would be enormous and classy.
Surely, my home not as
beautiful as Neverland but I am so grateful for having a family that loves me.
Very great writing about home.
BalasHapusnice post galuh!
BalasHapusnice writing and lot of details too in this essay
BalasHapusmine is waaaaayyy better
BalasHapusthis is a very good writing. good job!
BalasHapusoh my god love this
BalasHapusaw i wanna try your mom's dish too HAHA
BalasHapusThe details! You go, Gal!
BalasHapusvery good , but mine are too very good. but, atleast you do it very better than mine
BalasHapusnice post
BalasHapusI really your writing! and please comment on my blog
BalasHapusdont believe that ur home is so special for u! welldone!! plez comment in my blog too the commenters in galuh's blog
BalasHapusgood article it's very well writen
BalasHapuslove your writing style, good job!
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