Kamis, 11 Agustus 2016

HOME SWEET HOME

I grew up in the modest home. For me, home is a place to grow and learn about life. Home is a place where I can be 100 percent me and it’s where I don’t have to be perfect. I can study quietly but when my mom scold me I want runaway from home to Neverland. In my home everyone loves each other and my home is filled with love and joy and it spreads throughout my home.
When I go to another town, I really miss my lovely bed —the place where I can’t get of in the morning— and my mom’s dish. The atmosphere in my house is very joyful but sometimes it’s very noisy when my little sister cry loudly. Actually, there are some rules that should I obey like sweeping my own room, eat on time, etc.
Anyway, my dream house look like is would be lots of grass, a gorgeous garden and full of tropical flower. I wanna have a huge bedroom with a lot of pillows on my bed and there should be a beautiful and large pool. It would be enormous and classy.

Surely, my home not as beautiful as Neverland but I am so grateful for having a family that loves me. 

14 komentar:

  1. nice writing and lot of details too in this essay

    BalasHapus
  2. this is a very good writing. good job!

    BalasHapus
  3. aw i wanna try your mom's dish too HAHA

    BalasHapus
  4. The details! You go, Gal!

    BalasHapus
  5. very good , but mine are too very good. but, atleast you do it very better than mine

    BalasHapus
  6. I really your writing! and please comment on my blog

    BalasHapus
  7. dont believe that ur home is so special for u! welldone!! plez comment in my blog too the commenters in galuh's blog

    BalasHapus
  8. good article it's very well writen

    BalasHapus
  9. love your writing style, good job!

    BalasHapus